___ ? ___

To choose a title first is such an act

of pride (as if one knows just where a thought
will go.)  Is “Saying Goodbye to Our Son”
a better choice than “Letting Go?”  And when
is specificity superior
to breadth?  Do only parents know the fear
of being left behind when children leave?
Is every parting death, a tiny grave?


A title should invite…entice…alert
the reader to the text.  But what comes next?
That is the question.  Eyes will open wide
and see new truth.  Will truth lead to the good?
We hug and hope and wave goodbye.  The path
twists back and then away (“A Brand New Birth?)


    [Published in Presbyterian Outlook]

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